the question that i will be doing is comparing how does Ernest Hemingway and David Simon use language to build up suspense in their story.

the way Ernest Hemingway uses language to build suspense is he uses 3rd person instead of 1st person or second person he uses 3rd person to build more suspense.

Ernest Hemingway also uses short declarative sentences like for example in the story he only uses short sentences when speaking to AL .Ernest Hemingway also uses irony such as verbal irony when AL calls George a bright boy when he dosent mean it.

Another way Ernest Hemingway uses language to build suspense is he uses foal language such as the n word to describe the  in a bad manner.i think that this build suspense as he trying to create an effect.

one other way Ernest hemmingway st huses language to build suspense is the title.the title the killers give the audience a clear picture of what going to happen in the story.this builds irony such as dramatic irony to build suspense

the other way Ernest Hemingway builds suspence is when Ernest Hemingway was describing what al was doing with the gun like for example it says the cutt of the barrel of the shotgun made a slight bulge under waist of his too tightfitting overgout.this builds up suspence as it descrobes what al is doing i think the way al s doing i think the way ernest Hemingway was describing the scene built more suspense

 

Manasse –

You need to do a lot of work on where you mark sentences. You rarely use capital letters, even for the pronoun “I”.

You make reference to irony, which is good, but you should use a few more examples to show it. Remember to put quotations into quotation marks.